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FB:NG Volume 1 Cover - Ver. 3 by *Fiona-Maria:iconFiona-Maria:

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Submitted: August 10, 2007
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Scrapped - New version available. (I'll link later.)

Full view please! ^^

And yet another EDIT:: Haha, yeah, edited again. A while back now Magda's eye colour was changed, so I just adjusted some of the colours. I also changed the back colours to match her uniform rather than her eyes, since it looked wierd as green.

EDIT:: This is the third try redoing this. See the first and second version in my scraps. There was too much writing, so I moved the previous rambles to the covers it applied to.

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Third time lucky? XD XD I dunno. The anatomy was messed up on the first, and the colouring was bad on the second. So I tried to fix it. Also, I did my best to draw out the title myself. I like the words now (got rid of the names as well since they're on every page in the description, and if anyone tries to steal it, we can just link the admin to the original roleplay) :3 And since I made Magda stand up now (kneeling is too hard D8) there was a big space, so I added a riceball in the colour on the banner and stuff~ Lineart was done on Open Canvas, and the colouring and everything else was done on Photoshop. I was worried about Magda having her arms behind her back, because it looks like I'm hiding the hands, but I needed to make her look shy.

This cover features Magda Freon, the riceball.

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This is a manga based on a roleplay me and =HayliLiz are doing. It's about Fruits Basket, and it's the next generation of Sohmas!

If anyone's read up to the end of the series (I've read the odd parts from translations) then, well, just pretend it ended at the end of chapter 121 and everything went sour again. XD XD

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Page 1

Chapter 1
Page 3
Page 4
Page 5
Page 6
Page 7
Page 8
Page 9

Chapter 2
Page 11
Page 12
Page 13
Page 14
Page 15
Page 16
Page 17
Page 18
Page 19
Page 20

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Magda Freon (c) =HayliLiz
Fan story (c) me and =HayliLiz
Original Fruits Basket story (c) Natsuki Takaya.
Art by me.
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~Toru-bozu:iconToru-bozu: Aug 10, 2007, 1:48:29 PM
There are so many things wrong with this picture... :\

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~Toru-bozu:iconToru-bozu: Aug 10, 2007, 1:52:51 PM
Ugh, yeah... Let's see:
Her left arm is far too long, and longer than the right arm.
Her left shoulder looks like it is collapsing upon itself.
Her left knee looks like it was badly broken, since it is flat while the right knee is not.
Her skirt is folded oddly, and much unlike a skirt.
The bridge between both sides of her collar curves down when it should curve up.
Her eyes are crooked.

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*Fiona-Maria:iconFiona-Maria: Aug 10, 2007, 2:00:33 PM
Okay. Thankyou for the critique. ^^ I realised the arms were all wrong when I finished the picture, but it was too late to change them properly then D: But I'll keep that in mind when I do my next picture. The skirt was an experiment, so I'll ditch that idea XD I didn't notice the knee and eyes, but I see what you mean now you point it out. ( Aagh D: It looks really bad...>< ) And sorry if I sound like a retard, but which part is the bridge? ^^;

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Mood: Love =Morgwaine:iconMorgwaine: Aug 10, 2007, 2:22:22 PM
n_n keep the good work! :3 I think the idea is lovely X3, and I like the coloring :3 see ya! ^-^=

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*Fiona-Maria:iconFiona-Maria: Aug 10, 2007, 2:31:03 PM
Thankyou very much! ^^ I'm glad you like it! :D

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~Toru-bozu:iconToru-bozu: Aug 10, 2007, 2:54:59 PM
D: I made "bridge" up because I had no other word for it, so don't feel retarded. xD You know where the too sides of the collar come down into a triangle? It's the small piece of cloth between them.

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*CreativeImages:iconCreativeImages: Aug 10, 2007, 3:53:41 PM
Love it!! The only thing that slightly bothers me is her thighs seem to short compared to her arms. But other than that, the color is great, the blue really stands out. Shading is FANTASTIC! GREAT JOB!!

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*Fiona-Maria:iconFiona-Maria: Aug 11, 2007, 3:21:22 AM
Yeah, I think I'm going to try and do this again with anatomy fixes and stuff :D And thankyou very much! I'm glad you like the colouring! x3 It was an experiment, so I might stick with it ^^

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